| 2005-10-09 09:51:09 |
Slut Mom Bangs her sons Coach Part2
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bit short, no intro or any real description |
| 2005-10-09 10:21:12 |
Slut Mom Bangs her sons Coach Part2
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hell im giving u a 10, but it was too short to read. lol. JK JK |
| 2005-10-09 13:05:30 |
Slut Mom Bangs her sons Coach Part2
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i gave u a 10... but it was a bunch of shit |
| 2005-10-11 14:06:56 |
Slut Mom Bangs her sons Coach Part2
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Keep trying, I'll read any story with a title that starts with 'Slut Mom' |
| 2005-10-13 16:19:55 |
Slut Mom Bangs her sons Coach Part2
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Wow that story was like one big paragraph it just kept going and going and going like the energizer bunny spelling was horrible so was punctuation but the main problem was that there is no break up of sentences periods commas something would have been better than nothing if you don't get it I wrote this comment without any of that stuff either to show it sucks when you have no pauses when you have to keep reading and the sentence never ends |