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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-21 13:57:16 | fucking my son | I don't really see why it's necessary that you specify so early on in the story that the charachters are Indian. It doesn't have any baring on the story and you even gave your charachters Western names. Shawn, Mike and Paul are very western/European names. Mike and Paul are actually christian names. So it really doesn't make sense. You may want to skip those kinds of details in the future when they have no relevance to the actual story. Overall not a bad effort though. The end sex was a bit rushed for all the build up. -S- |
| 2005-12-21 14:47:09 | fucking my son | hmmm....no indian mother wld ever dream abt these kinda stuff with her own son......u r fucking liar!!!! |
| 2005-12-21 17:03:50 | fucking my son | That was stupid!! |
| 2005-12-21 17:08:04 | fucking my son | 5-10 didn't really get it for me i love incest and anal try again but more realistic next time it was a little hard to really believe |
| 2005-12-21 22:06:38 | fucking my son | the story wasent bad at all ,by the way where is arabian gulf? do you mean persian gulf? thanks for the story |