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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-03-03 09:55:24 | fucking my son | BULL CRAP. |
| 2008-03-21 17:08:32 | fucking my son | nothing ruins a story like having extra retard babies |
| 2008-04-13 01:48:03 | fucking my son | Huh... this sounds suspiciously liike another story on here, where the son is scared of storms and the mom waits for him and such and gets pregnant... Although that other story (Think its something like Edwards motherly love or something like) is definitely written better... but hey if it isn't just a rip off and it actually happened, that cool have fun and let us know more of your exploits, but for now I remain highly suspicious |
| 2005-10-09 02:20:22 | Living with Cherrie... | Fuck you Miker! I fucking loved it! Keep it up! |
| 2005-10-09 15:58:48 | Living with Cherrie... | Miker's an ass, don't listen to that little fuck. I got to school for literature and writing and he insults some of the best work. Well done, make it longer. Give more detail..More of his emotions about it. You also don't have to describe merely what he can see. You can work into the omniscient and show the scene, then revert to his angle. Or you can switch into the body of one ofn the girls. |