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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-13 00:04:04 | Trial By Sperm | I enjyd it; it was a two hard-on story, your use of the language wasn't too bad, and like I said two-hards (but no cum). u gotta 9 r |
| 2005-10-13 14:56:56 | Trial By Sperm | You know other people can use the same name right? right i wasn't here. i give it 8/10 anyways i was not here XD |
| 2005-10-17 17:50:46 | Trial By Sperm | There's some rather petty behavior going on in here. Folks deflating and inflating ratings. It doesn't really matter. All that matters is the quality of your story. your story is decent. actually, it's better than decent. it would be excellent except that it was somewhat unrealistic that the man climaxed then immediately nailed the girl. men his age simply don't function like that. best of luck with your future writing! |
| 2005-10-21 13:48:37 | Trial By Sperm | i ive it 20/20 it is that good u gave real good detale and u spoke the truth who could blame a guy for fucking a hottie like the one u discribedand a vergin no less wow!!very good man |
| 2005-10-24 06:27:57 | Trial By Sperm | Great story! I loved the "almost getting caught" at the end.You're very talented. 9/10. |