| 2005-11-03 00:24:24 |
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billy should have gotten some at the end |
| 2005-11-05 13:49:57 |
Life's a Beach
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Well that was different. Good story but Billy should have got to fuck the stranger too. Also fuck tunnel fuck box and fuck tool sound really fucken stupid. Stick to cock clit cunt stuff like that |
| 2005-11-18 11:39:01 |
Life's a Beach
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I certainly wish the writers of these stories would learn how to spell, and use punctuation marks correctly. It would make for a much better read. |
| 2005-11-21 15:45:22 |
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GOOD concept, could have used more Billy/stranger/mom at the end. You should read Titman Al's thoughts on this topic, as he is acknowledged as the expert among us. Write more of this type and perhaps be more basic in your synonyms? |
| 2005-11-22 13:38:18 |
Life's a Beach
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god i was dripping |