| 2005-10-15 18:30:12 |
The Club pt 6 - Mary and Beth 2
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Not enough descrption and feelings of sex acts to make me come during reading |
| 2005-10-16 05:26:01 |
The Club pt 6 - Mary and Beth 2
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next time, less story more sex!! Tyr describing the sexual and bondage acts more definately instead of the rituals and dinners and stuff, otherwise, you write a GREAT story! Just get more sexually graphic that's all! Thank you! |
| 2005-10-29 03:32:01 |
The Club pt 6 - Mary and Beth 2
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From reading your story. I'm guessing you don't get laid too often. |
| 2005-10-30 17:28:57 |
The Club pt 6 - Mary and Beth 2
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I see we have another asshole that's calling himself a writer. 1/10 |
| 2005-11-03 16:51:27 |
The Club pt 6 - Mary and Beth 2
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Please read "Janet's Initiation" story. You'll have what to learn about true writting on this subject. |