| 2005-11-13 12:34:11 |
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Hey, Banshee Blue, if you're a "grammer whore," you'd better learn how to spell it. It's grammar, with an "a." Not grammer with an "e." But I totally agree with your assessment on this story by Lenika. |
| 2005-11-13 20:28:25 |
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Very nice story. Just need to work on the grammer. Other than that is was perfecto. Keep on writing this stories. Congrads |
| 2005-12-16 17:55:02 |
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sensual!! i loved it... the passion was intense.....wicked job! 10/10 |
| 2006-01-09 21:45:43 |
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Nice job!! A family that fucks together stays together. Keep on wrtting!!! |
| 2006-01-15 22:16:06 |
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loved it, cummed 2 times. keep em cumming. |