| 2005-11-01 21:53:40 |
Two Girls and a Little Horse
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I liked it. It was a very good story. could do with some changes.m but there small and do not keep it from getting a 10/10 from me! Kepp wrighting! |
| 2005-11-02 04:54:30 |
Two Girls and a Little Horse
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Great story 10/10 |
| 2005-11-02 18:24:48 |
Two Girls and a Little Horse
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did the horse cum too? |
| 2005-11-06 13:19:27 |
Two Girls and a Little Horse
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I did not expect to see this done in my world...I made woman for man, not for horses...... |
| 2005-11-07 02:03:21 |
Two Girls and a Little Horse
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A minature horse FIVE FOOT TALL? What we have here is horse SHIT people--truckloads of it. Learn about things before you write about them and your audience will believe you more. I give this a 1/10 for the errors |