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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-04 23:50:55 | Lost Valley Girl | Yes it was but thats OK because the story was pretty good. I like the setting in the seventies, the language, the voice, good job dude. The mistakes in grammer and structure did not really hurt the story. One of the few believible 'true stories'. Keep writing. |
| 2005-11-06 15:12:27 | Lost Valley Girl | Spelling should be better. Liked the story. Got my poker hard 8/10 |
| 2005-11-07 17:00:45 | Lost Valley Girl | damm i like a piece of that action..9/10 |
| 2005-11-08 13:28:20 | Lost Valley Girl | If this "true story" takes place in the seventies and you and your tiny pecker friends were teenagers you must be in your forties now and still obsessing about some drunk girl from thirty years ago. Did you continue to rape or are you now the father of a thirteen year old girl who is serving as cum-dumpster gangbang girl. And if she is, it for you and your friends, if so I REALLY am looking forward to the follow-up. One last thing, notice all the commas and periods, it is called punctuation. You would know about it if you went to school back in the seventies instead of forcing your wee manhood on girls and smoking pot. |
| 2005-11-20 10:43:23 | Lost Valley Girl | GOOD JOB BOYS OFFICER68 WOULD HAVE FUCKED HER THE SAME WAY.I PROBABLY WOULD HAVE TASTED HER CUNT WAY MORE THOUGH. |