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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-03 02:53:27 | Sarah Followed Me | An incredibly tortuous piece of erotic fiction. Deliciously written. Amazing build-up to the much-anticipated events, and even then not fully consumated. An exercise in restraint and slow development. My hat is off to you, Artscape. I pulled on it for nearly an hour as I absorbed each paragraph. Only a couple grammatical issues, but nothing to stress about. I can't wait to read the other parts tomorrow. Any further reading tonight would be harmful to my health. Well done. |
| 2005-12-03 14:03:47 | Sarah Followed Me | Very well written, if there is a continuatioin. If not, then the writer is keeping us from enjoying whatever the brother and sister will do next. |
| 2005-12-04 02:07:10 | Sarah Followed Me | Hard to belive this is fiction. I had to check back a couple of times just because this story gives just the right amount of eroticness*. *I do not know if that is even a word. |
| 2005-12-05 14:18:58 | Sarah Followed Me | this story is too long and the only decent thing happens at the end. |
| 2005-12-05 21:15:18 | Sarah Followed Me | i was alright, not quite enough erotics tho, just keeped going, drove me nuts |