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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-11-04 23:24:35 | Mrs. McConnel... MILF. | Hard to read. Predictable. Boring. Sorry I wish I could say more but it came off like a 80s porno movie. All it needed was a fireplace and a swimming pool. |
2005-11-05 01:34:10 | Mrs. McConnel... MILF. | What is the matter with using words, instead of short cuts, Your use of that abbrev. was distracting in that I didn't know u were talking about me, and that interupted an otherwise boring story. r |
2005-11-05 09:50:58 | Mrs. McConnel... MILF. | too short, absoloute horse shit! |
2005-11-05 12:24:36 | Mrs. McConnel... MILF. | Not bad. 5/10 |
2005-11-05 12:59:10 | Mrs. McConnel... MILF. | Adequate, but not good. I didn't know what a csl was either. There wasn't much in the way of seduction, and I couldn't figure out why you changed to present tense for the sex scene. The ass-to-mouth thing grossed me out, but that's just my personal preference. |