| 2008-01-04 01:54:22 |
my ex's dirty ass
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Sooo hot! I wish I had a man that would fuck my shitty hole! You got me incredibly wet! |
| 2008-01-25 15:49:27 |
my ex's dirty ass
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or those who say its gross, lookat the theme before u read it u fucking dumb asses, and yes there is shit near the anus for mr womens analogy guy! damn, some of u need to take ur heads out of ur own shit holes and wake up! but yea, it was a bit short, yet i liked it. |
| 2005-11-12 23:04:25 |
Pam's Fishing Trip
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Let my be the first to rip this crap to shreds. If the was the field and stream website, this would still suck. Its like one of those long jokes with no punchline. A really confusing intro, no set up, no descriptions, shallow characters, and a lousy sex scene. He has slept with (to paraphrase mr. eastwood) everything that has ever walked, crawled, swam, or flew, and that 3 minute butt pump was his prize? By the way, nobody eats bass, they are way too fishy. This is what would have happened if 'on golden pond' had been a porn, except a geriatric hepburn and fonda would have at least had some decent dialogue to go along with the slow sloppy sex. I feel as if I have wasted 10 minutes of my life. at least she got the knot right. try again, and next time add a story. |
| 2005-11-13 12:50:55 |
Pam's Fishing Trip
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Archaic is right; this story was way too loose. No real set-up, no decent build-up, nothing. All we got is a big-dicked guy near the end fucking the girl in the ass. Big deal. I give it a 3/10. |
| 2005-11-14 15:44:42 |
Pam's Fishing Trip
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i aggree with the other two that sucked ass how did u ever come up with this stupid idea maybe u should have just keep it to ur self and if ur going to put that much detail into the story about fishing make it at least right ur stupid how could u have even put this up and it had no story we knew nothing about them just that she was kind of fucked up and for all we knew she was 400 lbs and that could have ben the reason he didnt want to touch her for two days and what made him change his mind what a lil hook was that it cuz for part of it she just was trying to throw her self at him and he did nothing and now cuz she hurt he wants her how stupid i give it 1/10 if u want to make it then start writing better storys |