| 2005-12-19 00:51:41 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 2
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What do you mean go back to his old style, it's a continuation so he's just building off from before and since they reached that point he can't just START over |
| 2006-02-12 12:05:55 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 2
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Great Story. Gave me a great hardon. Keep up the good work. 10/10 |
| 2008-01-06 12:48:13 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 2
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i have read all three of the stories now and they all get a 10/10 in my book. please keep up all the good stories. |
| 2005-11-13 10:38:11 |
An Unexpected Tryst With Vera
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too much effort to make the story good. try to keep it a little more realistic |
| 2005-11-13 12:50:31 |
An Unexpected Tryst With Vera
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Pretty good, although quite short. Work on the dialog a bit. |