| 2005-11-13 10:23:33 |
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I liked it, a bit short though. Could of used a bit more foreplay, make it a deeper story. Still quite good. I hope you can make a part 2 or something along the same lines soon. |
| 2005-11-13 12:46:43 |
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It was an OK story. Like Hawk390 I'd have liked to see a little longer, more detailed story, but I'll give it a 6/10. |
| 2005-11-13 22:16:09 |
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it was good and i give it a 5/10 but i do agree that it should be a little more indept and i also think people shouldnt fight on the comment board dosent that seem childish |
| 2005-11-14 00:34:39 |
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well done is this your first? try reading some of the tops and look at there length (giving you a hint here) well done 6/10 |
| 2005-11-14 17:07:01 |
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By no means the first story. Some of mine are longer -- I put them down mostly as they come to me. I have had people on here tell me they like more foreplay, and I have added some to old stories. Most of there are a few years old and long ago posted to alt.sex.stories. |