| 2006-01-10 14:58:15 |
His bitch ........part one...Learning
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Start with the basics and work your way up. Ignore those who down play your stories. The best way to get better is by writing and learning. This storycould use a bit more background info as well as. Try to be as believable as possible. She would have needed a more before submitting. |
| 2006-01-25 11:36:13 |
His bitch ........part one...Learning
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OK start. She gave in too easily. Some rebellion would add to the realism. |
| 2005-11-22 09:28:42 |
frist rape n tape
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You ever hear of spell check! |
| 2005-11-22 10:01:16 |
frist rape n tape
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1/10 |
| 2005-11-22 19:06:36 |
frist rape n tape
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Amazing your cock started off as 7 inches and the grew to 9 inches part way through. And I agree with no, SPELL CHECK! |