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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-11-22 15:02:22 | thanksgiving | "I went downstairs and had some breakfast and watched tv but thats another story" I can so see you doing a story about you wathcing TV: I went downstairs and watched TV and it was Loony Toon and i said hey i like this show and i kept watching it until it made me laugh so hard then i went tot he amll and bought a couch it was fun i like couches then i went home and had thanksgiving dinner. -end what a shitty story 1/10 |
2005-11-22 15:27:28 | thanksgiving | oh, look! the turkey's here! crap, it's under-done. both her nipples and his cock were long and pointy? that can't be good. this made my thermometer pop back in. |
2005-11-22 20:34:53 | thanksgiving | Dude the story sucks!!!! It has absolutelly no build up and its one sentence long!!!!!! Improve the writeing and the ideas. Then post again |
2005-11-22 22:36:29 | thanksgiving | Look, you need to use punctuation. Its impossible to follow. |
2005-11-22 23:07:15 | thanksgiving | Did you fail english class? |