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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-07 18:09:35 | Kristen and the band room Re-Write | I would like to draw everyone's attention to the following: . One little dot. That's all you need to not sound like an idot. As for your responses, again, mad1 wrote the orginal. Some of the things could have been omited (i kept the dialogue mostly the same, just changed the way kristen looked and cleaned up the grammar and formatting). I have a few others in the works that I may be posting soon. |
| 2006-01-07 22:50:36 | Kristen and the band room Re-Write | this author is a dumbass, several misspelled words. |
| 2006-01-08 12:36:02 | Kristen and the band room Re-Write | this is the worst fucking story I've ever read. Completely unbelievable - yes, a lot of stories are unrealistic, that's why they're fiction, but at least they try for realism within the fiction - this one just sucked ass. No inexperienced virgin high schooler is going to grab a guy's cock on stage and say 'nice to see you too,' nor would she be comfortable enough to pull out a tampon after sex and "place it in her cunt" - seriously, even your wording is fuckin' childish, what are you like 15? Here's another tip dipshit, anal sex will NEVER be easier, or looser than vaginal sex the first time, even if the girl is a virgin. Grow up, get out, get some experience, then write more. Though you probably can't get a girl of your own, you can learn a lot just by reading. Good luck moron. |
| 2006-01-08 13:52:37 | Kristen and the band room Re-Write | since when do virgin highschool girl's asses just openly accept an 8 1/2 inch dick? |
| 2006-01-08 15:24:52 | Kristen and the band room Re-Write | Pretty damn good. but y would her mom have her on the pill at 12 lol |