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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-08 04:55:46 | Sarah Followed me - Chapter 3 | Don't listen to any of them. It was just fine the way it was.Too many discriptive words makes for a gaudish read. You're style is easy to read, has a nice flow to it, and has good pro look to it. If you ever wrote something else other than porn with a good story line to it, it would probably be well received. |
| 2005-12-08 05:25:04 | Sarah Followed me - Chapter 3 | JEWFACE I MIGHT BE A JEW BUT I BET YOU WONT SAY THAT BULLSHIT TO MY FACE, BY THE WAY GREAT STORY I LOVE EM ALL PLZ MAKE MORE. |
| 2005-12-08 14:23:23 | Sarah Followed me - Chapter 3 | Good story; sensuous; erotic. 9/10 |
| 2005-12-08 17:40:48 | Sarah Followed me - Chapter 3 | “Ya better be careful sis. I don’t want to get you pregnant,” I said getting a bit worried my precum would swim its way up her pussy. Dont you think that putting sperm in place of precum would be better said..great story but precum does not flow uphill, however sperm do swim where there is a medium to transport them. |
| 2005-12-09 20:22:56 | Sarah Followed me - Chapter 3 | you did a great job but it wasn't exactly a "fuck fest" that you promised in the beggining of the first one |