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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-11 00:42:26 | Monster--The Transformation Begins... | it's good if you want criticism on how ot make it beter id just sya , it's easy to maybe make htings more realistic diolog wise, it woudl help some flow a bit andm ake it seme natural , just an easy way to improve it. good job. |
| 2006-02-18 09:06:42 | Monster--The Transformation Begins... | yeh oogman no-one gives a fuck, stupid fucking faggot, dont even bother giving points out of 10 fuckhead |
| 2005-12-02 23:37:45 | Chained | C-R-A-P 1/10 |
| 2005-12-03 01:06:17 | Chained | great beginning. Hope to read more of her training. Please include puplic exhibition and humiliation, my gf loves storyies like that. She thought this story ended too soon. |
| 2005-12-03 14:17:36 | Chained | Oogman t-w-a-t 8/10 |