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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-04 18:33:01 | Debbie My wife | Great story. Had a hard on while I read it. Had to blow. |
| 2005-12-05 09:59:03 | Debbie My wife | What a sad mother fucker |
| 2005-12-06 05:13:27 | Debbie My wife | was great lol, but does it ever happen in real too? i would love to be john in that real story |
| 2005-12-07 07:42:10 | Debbie My wife | Now that's a marriage that'll last......NOT. |
| 2005-12-07 22:28:34 | Debbie My wife | What is it about british guys and the whole cockuld husband thing. A nibble? If the set up had taken any longer, his grandkids could have watched her get off. You need to establish a hook sooner if you want people to finish your story. Here is a hint, after you write the story, wait a day, reread it then delete it and rewrite it from memory. You will leave out all of the forgettable parts and have a story with some meat on its bones. |