| 2005-12-14 21:08:18 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 3b
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Great story, one of the best I have read please make a chapter 4 ... |
| 2005-12-15 18:07:47 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 3b
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hey i agree with Tu Madre oogman u suck , i really liked it 8.5/10 |
| 2005-12-17 11:35:20 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 3b
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very well written and only found one gramatical error. typing this w/ one hand because the other is busy w/ something else |
| 2005-12-18 14:33:43 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 3b
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I love this story, it made me cum very hard and strong, I wsh I have a brother to fuck me everynight |
| 2005-12-19 20:53:59 |
Sarah Followed Me - Chapter 3b
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As long as you read the entire story, not just the section, this is definately at least a 7/10. I mean the author has alot of promise, he's at least learned paragraphing(which is better than I can say for most) now if there was a little better punctuation, and maybe another part, it would be briliant.... |