| 2004-09-20 15:48:20 |
my sister Kim
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I agree with the lists. But also if u are goign to write a story than at least get the names right.Stacy or Kim u dumbass. And you dropped in BRian once or twice. For a sex story though, not bad. But you need some fukin therapy, wanting to get your sister pregnant is just fucked up.Oh, and a girl can't get pregnant when she is having her period jack off. I agree never write again you brainless jack ass.!!!! |
| 2004-10-14 21:08:02 |
my sister Kim
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ok look, this story was lacking, #1 its IMPOSSIBLE!! to get preg wen ur menstrating, #2... a 12 yr old cant get it up that fast, if the sis didnt like it then y did she get so horny in the end, ur grammer was pretty bad and the plot line needs some work 2 make it more realistic but other that all of that it was ok.. 4/10 |
| 2004-12-12 00:22:57 |
my sister Kim
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man..u r sick.ill never do that to my sister no matter how horny i am..dun write anymore,u fuckin suck!!! |
| 2004-12-14 19:50:05 |
my sister Kim
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woooooooo I'm gay gay gay gay gay I like fucking men in the ass woooooooooooo I'm critisizing a story someone wrote about fucking their sister oh yeah I am so cool because I can say stuff like that sucked and Woopidy doo I got fucked in a shoe. FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS FAGS |
| 2005-04-15 00:23:25 |
my sister Kim
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i cant believe how stupid and unrealistic some stories can be. 1/10 |