| 2005-12-20 07:42:35 |
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Great story. I liked it alot. please wirte more. |
| 2005-12-20 11:28:10 |
College Party Scene
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the girl is hot, great image, but there needs to be some tension, something wrong, and the guy can't be perfect, especially if the girl is. don't have the actual sex be filled with cliches and mindless lack detail |
| 2005-12-20 16:15:52 |
College Party Scene
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good story, Part 2 should be written |
| 2005-12-20 18:31:14 |
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I agree with retarded...sounds like he was more into his "10 inch cock" than he was the woman...the kind of guy who'll look in the mirror and go "down boy, its only me"!!! other than that the story needed way more detail...if she was that good u'd want to spend sooo much more time making her feel good...a quick blow job and a two minute fucking? puhleese, where are your manners? |
| 2005-12-21 23:07:52 |
College Party Scene
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good in bed |