| 2006-03-06 14:48:37 |
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Haha nice great writing detailed and all (to the dude who said improve wrting it is writing*) |
| 2006-03-20 03:25:42 |
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ur a good writer... but add more detail... she wouldnt just automatically want to fuck the shit out of him... put more emphasis on the BLACKMAIL... you'll do fine im sure... write chapter 2 |
| 2006-03-22 20:56:55 |
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More! More! More! |
| 2006-05-29 19:54:34 |
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daum boii!! im luvin the story.. it's tyte as a virgin pussy.. keep it up!! |
| 2006-06-02 08:24:24 |
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all right eat her pussy. |