| 2006-06-17 07:18:46 |
Vengeance 8
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Can't wait to read more, gotta run for today! Keep going though! |
| 2006-11-26 23:14:42 |
Vengeance 8
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whoa they better wake up before mom comes home!!!! |
| 2007-07-14 07:15:07 |
Vengeance 8
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wonderful |
| 2005-12-30 16:58:48 |
Vengeance 9
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Pretty good, 10/10 because I just love the whole theme, but there are some name screwups, some mixed words, and thats atlttle sad, and can easly fixed. |
| 2005-12-30 18:27:16 |
Vengeance 9
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Yeah, I've taken to proofreading pretty thoroughly now. Twelve through fifteen, which are finished and under review have almost no mistakes. |