| 2005-01-15 01:34:51 |
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I like the mention of the larger lady and the taboo of the tampon. Way to put in two things one never sees in much erotica. It made the story even more of a turn on!! |
| 2005-02-23 10:57:37 |
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very good premise for a story but i would have liked it better if he was described as having ahuge fucking cock and that while watching his sister his Aunt walked up behind him and caught him and was not mad at him for spying on his sister after seeing the size of what was in his hand and would not tell his mom if he would jack it off in front of all her girlfriends at their ladies meeting next week |
| 2005-01-15 01:34:51 |
THE MASTURBATER
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I like the mention of the larger lady and the taboo of the tampon. Way to put in two things one never sees in much erotica. It made the story even more of a turn on!! |
| 2005-02-23 10:57:37 |
THE MASTURBATER
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very good premise for a story but i would have liked it better if he was described as having ahuge fucking cock and that while watching his sister his Aunt walked up behind him and caught him and was not mad at him for spying on his sister after seeing the size of what was in his hand and would not tell his mom if he would jack it off in front of all her girlfriends at their ladies meeting next week |
| 2004-10-12 20:38:43 |
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describe the way she does stuff and what she does more... use lots of adjectives and imagery!!!!! |