| 2006-01-03 16:01:24 |
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not bad so far keep writing like to know what happens in the end.....10/10 |
| 2006-01-03 16:09:11 |
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yeah very good and remember 'voyuerism'' |
| 2006-01-03 16:19:40 |
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i didnt really get wet over it but it kept my attention |
| 2006-01-03 17:24:45 |
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good, good spelling, good ideas, as with sexpot don't usually go for rape stories but this was good...10/10 |
| 2006-01-03 17:50:26 |
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I like several of the previous commenters, am not big into rape, but you did a good job on this one and I enjoyed it a lot, I give it a 10/10 |