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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-07-30 22:22:19 | My first slave | a bit rushed, bot very descriptive. it was too easy. |
| 2006-09-29 19:38:10 | My first slave | whens part 2 coming out |
| 2006-12-05 12:52:24 | My first slave | i love it |
| 2007-05-14 16:22:36 | My first slave | Oooooh fabulous! A little short though and you could give some more description on the blowjob ;) |
| 2006-01-04 01:22:31 | Bounds of Friendship | Dude... You're one lucky guy! I love me some petite girl! Heh... this comin' from a virgin! Anyway... great writing technique. The only problems I spotted were some minor, yet understandable spelling errors. And you may have used the "I then" and "She then" statements too much, but thats just my writing experience talking! Great work, man! I hope you n her are still together. |