| 2006-01-06 00:22:17 |
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OMG love the ending but yeah it does need a sequal but anyway im glad i finally got to read the end ur a brilliant writer. 10/10 |
| 2006-01-06 14:18:34 |
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Once again, thank you all for voting and taking the time to read my story. I will be posting another story on here shortly. It's not the 2nd part of this one sadly, but it is the very 1st adult story i have writen. Thank you. |
| 2006-01-07 17:18:29 |
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Jessica, you wrote: "tipocal" boys. What's a tipocal boy. Did you mean "typical?" Come on, people, learn how to spell for God's sake. lousy spelling is inexcusable. This could be a pretty good tale, but .... 5/10 |
| 2006-01-07 18:23:47 |
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im sorry Original Oogman that i miss spelled some words, ill make sure to be the best speller like you Sir! |
| 2006-01-08 03:19:50 |
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Gotta agree with Oog, you need to take that extra time before you submit, because it hampers the effect you are trying to give on this story.. It was very nice but the mispellings were a huge distraction. 7/10 |