| 2006-01-09 09:41:43 |
Cheryl - A True Exhibitionist
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Good, but way too long |
| 2006-01-09 15:07:54 |
Cheryl - A True Exhibitionist
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I really liked it until Jenny showed up. The writer apparently got so excited he forgot the character's names. |
| 2006-01-10 01:17:28 |
Cheryl - A True Exhibitionist
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great story. my gf will love it. she was in her thirties before she gave in to her need for exhibiting her charms. i hopr there will be more longer tales of her exploits |
| 2006-01-10 02:02:59 |
Cheryl - A True Exhibitionist
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Well written, but it dragged on many times. Yes, we know Cheryl has a reoccurring desire to expose herself, but you've got to pick and choose your scenes, and connect everything for a flowy effect, instead of day by day by stretching day. Wonderful descriptions, wonderful talent. Less is more, and you should consider that in your next successful project. Well done. 8/10 |
| 2006-01-10 07:19:16 |
Cheryl - A True Exhibitionist
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This must be one one all-time greats on XNXX. I had an erection throughout and had to come (twice) before the end,. Pity you mixed up the character's name. 10/10 |