| 2007-07-31 13:50:06 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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long and drawn out, the story could use a highlight reel and be the best parts edited onto a single much shorter page. The content is disgusting, even for a sexual deviant. The writing is mostly poorly done, amaturish, and contrived. Over the top nonsensical extreme Jerry Springer fantasy. Oedipal overtones with no taste or flavor. |
| 2007-07-31 23:36:11 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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nice |
| 2007-08-01 13:19:29 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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THE BEST STORY ON HERE XNXX IN MY OPINION...Thanks a lot... |
| 2007-08-03 14:13:43 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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wow great story one of the best i have read so far but it is unrealistic but still a good story |
| 2007-08-04 15:15:10 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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fuck yourself loser! |