| 2004-05-23 03:24:40 |
Sleep Over Part 2_(1)
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hey!try adding more of sex between the girls or group sex and more of nakedness |
| 2004-05-24 02:16:31 |
Sleep Over Part 2_(1)
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I want to do you sometimeplease |
| 2004-05-25 01:08:29 |
Sleep Over Part 2_(1)
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Lots of gramatical errors. Need to fix. |
| 2004-05-30 13:36:41 |
Sleep Over Part 2_(1)
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needs to have one or two more continuations. a little more detail also. good story though. |
| 2004-07-01 20:03:26 |
Sleep Over Part 2_(1)
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in part one you said that she got fucked by a dildo, and then in this u said she had never had anything more than a finger. forgetting that i liked it alot and wish it had been longer. |