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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-15 13:09:39 | My horny friend | It isn't bad for a first attempt, and unlike other contributions there i no need for a re-write, although if you go through the story you will notice a few things to improve. I recommend you look at some of the stories posted by Gail Holmes. The last sentence makes it difficult for a sequel collection. |
| 2006-01-16 02:21:45 | My horny friend | Good story for a first attempt. It was somewhat short, and had a few errors in it. These are to be expected in a first post. A story that would show experience would have multiple encounters in different places, no spelling errors, and a good description of all the characters involved. For the two you missed, try using Microsoft Word. For the spelling and writing longer. |
| 2008-02-27 08:48:03 | My horny friend | It made me cum lol |
| 2006-04-30 08:58:30 | The Contest_(1) | OK but would like a little ball torture while slave is hanging from the hook. |
| 2008-03-06 00:42:05 | The Contest_(1) | fuck me |