| 2006-04-12 06:54:42 |
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you all are going to DIE AND ROT IN HELL END IS NEAR YOU SICK FUCKS .357magnum TO THE FUKING HEAD AND END YUR SICK PERVERTED LIFES ALL THOW A BEAT DOW TO ALL OF YOU COCKSUCKIN FUCKING RAPPISTS DIEDIEDIEDIE MAY YOU ALL ROT IN HELL YOU DEVIL WORSHIPING FREAKS I'M COMING FOR YOU ALL YUR GUNA DIE ALL Of YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2006-04-12 19:47:47 |
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Don't read the story if you don't like it. You're just as guilty for reading it, you bastards. It was a good story, aside from the giant paragraph, break it up next time. |
| 2006-05-02 15:28:34 |
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dude that is not cool man ur own sisiter u sick fuck |
| 2006-05-07 15:57:17 |
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Where was the fisting? it was a good story other wise |
| 2006-05-15 04:37:26 |
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You are just fine. Keep you paragraphs limited to 5 or 6 lines...Makes reading a whole lot easier on the eyes...It's not what other think or say about your writting...it's what you feel comfortable to write about! Some of the other reads weren't very happy with your story...why?...They couldn't have done it any better! Keep up the work/ writting 10/10 |