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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-23 20:08:46 | Alone with Stepsister's | a 3sum would have been better |
| 2006-01-23 21:27:37 | Alone with Stepsister's | pretty good but hey i have to say you could use some work ill read part 2 now and tell you if you got better |
| 2006-01-24 15:57:58 | Alone with Stepsister's | Dude there was a hard-on so shut the fuck up |
| 2006-01-28 11:34:47 | Alone with Stepsister's | this shit was good but u need to get alot better sorry man 7/10 |
| 2006-01-29 06:06:00 | Alone with Stepsister's | If you know that you have spelling and grammar problems, please be courteous enough to correct them. "u" is not a word. Aside from that, there was no seduction, I did not enjoy the verbal abuse at the end, and ass-to-mouth is gross. I sure hope that you do think that your 8" is ok, because it's at least 2 1/2" above average. Overall, a respectable effort, but not stellar. I'll wait to see how part two goes. =Dreamer= |