| 2005-02-26 15:28:27 |
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Excellent writing from a technical and interest point of view. Well crafted story line. Wonderful flow of action. Definitely interesting to those of us who appreciate a well-written erotic STORY as opposed to those who don't give a flying fuck about the story and just want the fucking. I'm off to Ch 2! |
| 2005-05-04 19:23:12 |
Daughter's Prison - part 1
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ooook.. you have 'pregnant' listed in your contents, and that came in where? from the way this one went with all the grinding and groping, i'm going to assume that it happens in part 2. |
| 2006-06-19 07:06:46 |
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That story sounds true to me.Hope you got to spit on his grave |
| 2006-07-15 13:14:10 |
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i don't like rape but the differce between rape suckation is salesmanship |
| 2007-07-07 15:47:46 |
Daughter's Prison - part 1
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srry that that happen to you |