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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-26 23:40:59 | The Apartment Next Door | Great story keep up the good work |
| 2006-01-29 05:40:16 | The Apartment Next Door | Very good. Excellent description, and no pesky dialogue to screw up. I didn't really understand the thing with the numbered paragraphs, and the word "titties" was out of place compared with the rest of your excellent diction, but I enjoyed this thoroughly. =Dreamer= |
| 2006-01-29 16:25:02 | The Apartment Next Door | the end let it down a bit but got me wet so cant be too bad |
| 2006-03-24 16:17:15 | The Apartment Next Door | its was very good but lose the numbered paragraphs |
| 2006-02-26 00:51:21 | New Neighbor, New Mother | Well, this is a gem. The guy cheating on his perfectly good wife made me sad, but the rest of the story was just great. The sex was delightfully realistic. This is evidence that a story doesn't need four orgasms in a row to be really hot. The touch of lactation was well done; it didn't turn into some sort of weird obsession or anything. You gave just enough background to be interesting and create a little bit of a relationship. Good job creating a scenario where the commitment-free sex was plausable. The pacing was good. I liked the way the story started at an orgasm and went backward from there. This story is really first-class. Thanks. =Dreamer |