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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-03-25 22:53:31 | First get together | fuck that was a kickass story! i bet whoever you're with right now is fucking lucky... 10/10 |
| 2006-03-30 08:02:24 | First get together | I am criticizing yes, but hopefully in a constructive manner, so please don't take offence. Run through a word processor, they help find most spelling errors, and grammatical mistakes, (major ones at least) Secondly use paragraphs most important, I can't stress this enough but when I am pulling my pud off to this story and I lose my place, my boner goes down, and its quite frustrating. And make it a bit longer, not all of us cum in like 2 seconds, and even when we do you cum far faster and harder from a story that gets you worked up ;) Nice perspective though in which you have written this piece, hopefully with this advice you will continue to write rather than be scared off like many other users of this site. |
| 2006-08-19 20:51:52 | First get together | why do people keep correcting writers because they can't cum in time??? I personally don't want to hear about someone doing that to my story at all and I don't know who does. Having said that, paragraphs are good and other than that not bad at all for a first time. You get a high rating from me |
| 2008-01-11 05:07:07 | First get together | awsome!! |
| 2008-04-20 22:57:29 | First get together | I enjoyed your story very much. It's nice to hear the female side of things. Thank you. 8/10 You do need to put paragraphs into your story. JLC |