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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-27 15:58:16 | The Girl Who Lost Her Bikini | My computer used to be black, now it's white ;D 10 out of 10 |
| 2007-03-21 07:03:04 | The Girl Who Lost Her Bikini | need paragraphs |
| 2007-04-01 01:48:38 | The Girl Who Lost Her Bikini | well written with good description; however, the use of indentaion must not be ovelooked. This would improve you already high quality writing. |
| 2007-04-07 05:09:14 | The Girl Who Lost Her Bikini | my rooms walls used to be black, i decided to give it a coat of white withought using money. |
| 2007-04-11 19:48:06 | The Girl Who Lost Her Bikini | i love it! your use of vocab. is nothing less than fantastic. please continue. 10 / 10 for sher |