| 2004-04-19 20:21:20 |
Farm Girl - part 1_(0)
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Wow that was a great story i read it many times and i read the rest of them too. The rest are great if you like this one you should read the rest. |
| 2004-04-28 12:03:06 |
Farm Girl - part 1_(0)
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Yeah, taht person is right. it was excellently written, but your grammer/punctiation could have been better. Try to use correct capitalization rules when writing the non-dailogue parts. |
| 2004-05-01 17:06:03 |
Farm Girl - part 1_(0)
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Hey great story, some imagination I must say. I always wanted to know what those little country bitches were up to, now I know. |
| 2004-05-03 10:01:17 |
Farm Girl - part 1_(0)
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o my days! this made me frigg my pussy and want 2 try out the whole dildo at school -i loved the dog bit what do cats really like???? brillliant story! |
| 2004-05-03 21:08:00 |
Farm Girl - part 1_(0)
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I really extreamly liked this 1 |