| 2006-02-23 09:02:41 |
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top notch |
| 2006-02-23 12:26:41 |
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Screw legality... that was pretty cool and creative. Good Story |
| 2006-03-07 02:07:49 |
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not bad, good detail, but a little short on the sex. Only came once. |
| 2006-03-13 01:33:35 |
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well kinda boring but what can I say at lest this one can spell |
| 2006-06-23 03:18:13 |
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haha i love it when people say the writers are sick. i like the story. guess i have to read 4 more chapters now. |