| 2006-03-03 07:17:57 |
Legally Binding
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Good stuff, it was smooth. Keep on writing, you are Pro level! |
| 2007-02-19 07:41:03 |
Legally Binding
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Finc, you are indeed a good story-teller but you need to work on your writing skills. Rereading even once would help with the spelling errors. And the grammar can be terrible at times. But as I said, I LOVE the storytelling. You've got that down. One more thing...the inches in a bra size do not reflect the size of the breasts. It is merely the measurment around the torso directly below the breasts. The cup is what indicates the size of breast (A being smallest and EEE being the largest -that I've ever heard of). Saying a woman is a 38 just implies that she is pretty chunky or has an unnaturally large ribcage (If you are maintaining that she is a slim figured woman). |
| 2007-03-20 20:01:48 |
Legally Binding
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A bit too long for my taste, but alright story. |
| 2007-04-01 21:19:40 |
Legally Binding
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I thoght that the old man was video taping the whole thing and was going to show it to his son and he would be the one to throw her into the street because she was unfaithfull wife |
| 2006-02-28 16:44:27 |
Marooned on gronk
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Good.....very good! |