| 2006-03-05 17:12:15 |
A slut is a slut
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Thanks for your comments. Sorry for the spelling as it was 12:00 PM and I was bored as hell. Its my first story anyway. I think I will put more effort Into my next one. Thank you! |
| 2006-03-10 06:41:33 |
A slut is a slut
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absolutely terrible story. Poorly structured; poorly written; poorly spelled. Awful. Don't quit your day job. |
| 2006-03-17 21:40:07 |
A slut is a slut
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you should go ahead and give up on life, |
| 2006-04-12 06:37:30 |
A slut is a slut
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todadoda I wouldl't have sex with you not even with a ten foot pole with it double bagged hahahahahhahaa dumb ass you must work at burger world suck cocks right yeah i remember you you sucked me pretty good I comed in yur eye |
| 2006-05-04 11:16:23 |
A slut is a slut
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great story but to damn short |