| 2005-08-08 16:50:48 |
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u have puppys yet? |
| 2005-08-10 00:09:51 |
Farm Girl - part 1_(0)
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I would have to say that it was a very good story but seemed a little too jumbled. Too many things going on at once. I would have to give it a 9/10 though for amazing use of imagination! |
| 2005-08-10 22:24:27 |
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Kind of unrealistic. 13 inches? Super glued dildos on the saddle? 'Doggy' style gang bang? As with most stories written about girls by men, the anatomy is kinda shakey. On the up side it was very readable, cohesive, and clear. Flesh out her character a little, and either tone down the wild stuff, or go ahead and let the horse fuck her too. |
| 2005-08-20 22:24:53 |
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Way to long. Highly unlikely. Your use of language is a little clumsy. But again way to long!!! If your story is this crazy then i agree: let the horse have a go, and now your at it what about a bull or an elefant?.. or not. BUT practice makes perfect so keep it up!!! You'll get it right eventually. =) 4/10 |
| 2005-08-21 09:35:06 |
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This story may not be the highest rated story but, with as many people who've looked it over. It most likely has to be the best. At this point it's not that far off of 600,000. I'd like to see any of you nit-pickers beat that. I wish I could. |