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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-04-15 17:19:43 | My Very First Time_(0) | nice story! Comment mad by: Kay aka chamillionaire's bitch |
| 2006-04-15 23:11:46 | My Very First Time_(0) | they shud b arrested 4 kidde porn and incest...... |
| 2006-04-16 07:15:56 | My Very First Time_(0) | child Porn -> not cool |
| 2006-04-16 11:37:43 | My Very First Time_(0) | I could do without the written out vocalizations. It read like a batman comic 'zap pow zam, arrghghg myyyy cuunnntttt!'. Terry was a freaking moron and every bit of his dialogue could be done away with. As a true story it was over the top and implausible, but with a re-edit it could be decent fiction. I dont know if you noticed, but you did not describe any of the charactors or the setting, just the actions. Keep trying. |
| 2006-04-18 12:37:24 | My Very First Time_(0) | Sally sure has an interesting life before her. But can she do better or even as good as this in the future? |