| 2006-03-12 08:02:02 |
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Very good story. One of those that can be believeable. I can see this happening but by a father who is a little sick in the head and very frustrated as well. Still, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Gave it a 9/10. |
| 2006-03-22 11:19:31 |
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Very well written. I could totally see this happening. It's a father's try at saving his daughter from a bad reputation and an unfulfilling marriage. What father wouldn't do what he thought he had to to save his baby girl? |
| 2006-04-17 16:21:13 |
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just wish she was my daughter |
| 2006-06-14 09:22:04 |
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hope you continue it |
| 2006-09-11 09:52:38 |
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How do you find the first chapter? |