| 2007-10-25 10:32:27 |
Karen_(0)
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Karen sounds like someone you could get many hours of fun from. And she's so nice and close to the office. |
| 2006-03-12 00:38:26 |
HOW I MADE MY SISTER-IN-LAW A WHORE
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its ok but make it a little more have more paragraphs. also it would have been better if the sister inlaw had been put in a more dangerous situation like a street walker job. |
| 2006-03-12 02:35:00 |
HOW I MADE MY SISTER-IN-LAW A WHORE
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you need to connect your sentences better and edit for fluency. but good story. hope for more |
| 2006-03-12 19:02:10 |
HOW I MADE MY SISTER-IN-LAW A WHORE
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what the motherfucker needs is a brain |
| 2006-03-13 01:37:12 |
HOW I MADE MY SISTER-IN-LAW A WHORE
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proofread please. |