| 2008-01-04 21:02:38 |
slut-white
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great story, more to come??? |
| 2006-03-12 22:15:39 |
He Loves Me Not
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Great story, i liked it. Way to add up to a conclusion. You realize that it's not just about the sex, but romance is a big part. Keep it coming |
| 2006-03-18 00:45:12 |
He Loves Me Not
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loved the story. but for a suggestion use indentation next time it makes it a little easier to read |
| 2007-05-09 23:05:13 |
He Loves Me Not
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aw this is cute. ive been with my boyfriend for almost five months and i want our first time to be like this |
| 2007-10-02 14:34:37 |
He Loves Me Not
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that was awesome n i agree with guy who posted b4 me its not just about sex but romance ,good work , n more plz :) |