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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-04-01 03:51:33 | Teaching Dani | Only thing that disturbed me was the waste thing. Look up from the dictionary what's the difference between waste and waist. But else, it was great! |
| 2006-04-01 10:33:48 | Teaching Dani | another but wit mom |
| 2006-04-04 15:49:30 | Teaching Dani | Great story...the end where the guy gets fucked in the ass wrecks it all but otherwise a great story =) |
| 2006-04-04 16:54:47 | Teaching Dani | I have tried a couple of times to re-write the ending and correct some of the grammer issues but it doesn't seem to work. I guess it will have to stay as is and I will try to improve on the next story. Lance |
| 2006-04-05 19:58:12 | Teaching Dani | Well, Lance, I'm happy to hear that yo're willing to work on your "grammer" as you said. Only trouble, it's spelled "grammar" with two "a's." Good luck. |