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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-05-04 23:30:39 | The Ride Home_(1) | If you are shooting for the lowest rating...it worked congradulations!!!!... |
2006-05-13 15:35:53 | The Ride Home_(1) | mather chod mujhe kuch nahi samja |
2006-05-14 13:03:34 | The Ride Home_(1) | lousey |
2006-05-15 18:47:27 | The Ride Home_(1) | what the fuck was that. is that in some sort of code |
2006-05-17 04:43:20 | The Ride Home_(1) | Ah-ha! The last third of the story reveals everything! I can see real words like "your" and "and"! It looks like you spend a lot of time studying the liner notes on rap albums, and just got tired of it near the end. Not only is it awful, it's inconsistently awful. If you can take the trouble to try to write in some other language, maybe you can try to write a good story. Please don't make any more jokes like this. They're not funny. =dreamer= |